This revise and edit passage features a short passage about why the popular dessert Dippin' Dots is not sold in grocery stores. The passage is followed by ten STAAR-formatted questions that match the 2016 released STAAR fourth grade writing test.
-passage with multiple choice questions (students circle their answers)
If you like this example of my work, you can find a bundle of eight revising and editing passages for fourth grade here:
4th Fourth Grade STAAR Revise and Edit Passages Bundle Revising Editing