Directions: Rewrite the sentences to make them more descriptive, but don’t change the meaning of them. Add at least one adjective, one adverb, and one phrase that appeals to one of your 5 senses.
Rubric is built in.
Drab: He came home and went to sleep.
Fab: He slowly came in the door, laid his sleepy head on the soft, cool pillow and drifted off to sleep.