A lesson to help pupils to improve the quality of their writing based around a fairground image. The lesson uses the Alan Peat Exciting sentences to develop a high quality description and focuses on precise and interesting descriptive vocabulary.
Suitable for Y5 and Y6
Matches the 2016 writing criteria for Year 6 Sats teacher assessment.
- Class powerpoint for teaching including Alan Peat sentence
- Resources for planning using a picture and senses table
- A word bank of high level vocabulary
- A sample text and text with annotation