Takes a look at a first draft (following the setup presented in the Pocket Concept - Writing the first draft) being improved, step by step, day by day, until a basic, simple essay is an outstanding paper. Geared towards reluctant writers. Can be used for self starter advanced 6th grade through adult reluctant or remedial. Fits the standards for 8th grade writing. Written in easy to understand language. Based mostly upon a comparison and contrast essay of two superheroes. Can be modified (fully editable) PPT. Samples given in speaker's notes.