This handout includes two students' written responses to the topic 'Should school uniforms be compulsory?' - one is a low-scoring response, while the other is a better response. The handout prompts students to compare the two responses, to think about why one is better, and to identify the features of the higher scoring response (including its introduction, contention, body paragraphs, topic sentences, evidence, conclusion). A blank planning template on the topic 'Country versus City' is included. This is suitable for junior high school students.