This product aligns with L.5.3a - Expand, combine, and reduce sentences for meaning, reader/listener interest, and style.
It is one worksheet with 8 paragraphs that are a combined narrative of a student's trip to New York City with his/her family. It is written in a somewhat rambling tone and students rewrite each paragraph to make it sound more professional. There is an Extra Time activity at the end of the pages. There are also suggested answers on the last page.
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firstname.lastname@example.org +Quietly providing Quality+