The purpose of this lesson is to review the importance of editing and revision. The good and bad essays that I created for this assignment are two essays about something that I love to help the students get to know me better-one just happened to be purposely written really poorly. Due to the personal nature of the essays, I have not listed them for sale. Any essays that happen to be written in a similar vein would work.
The homework that is noted here are excerpts taken from a novel that wasn't chosen to be read in class that year and edited to have 10 mistakes and the students had to then identify them. All the other components to this lesson are present both in this package and available separately.