This mini lesson includes a "before" example paragraph and an "after" example (about the subject of Minecraft) to teach students to combine sentences that repeat ideas, and to combine short choppy sentences. It also has a student activity (329 words-Before Paragraph) which instructs students to apply revisions to remove repetitions and choppiness (also about Minecraft subject). Included is a KEY/ Possible Revision example for the student activity.
Minecraft Theme Combine Sentences
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