My students enjoyed marking their work and their peers' narrative using this checklist. Instead of just ticking every boxes, students are also required answer the questions with examples from their narrative.
This checklist will help students to understand what they can include and improve on their narrative writing. I used this to help students prepare for the NAPLAN and other creative writing tasks.
This is in a Microsoft Word format so you can easily change some criteria to match the needs of your student(s).