After students have written a narrative essay, they will complete the attached activities in order to make revisions. First of all, they will choose three sentences that are shorter and/or could use additional detail. They will write these under the "Old Sentence" sections. Using one of the strategies listed at the top, they will re-write their sentences and create revised ones that can be added to their essay. After completing their sentences and changing them in their writing, they will go through the questions on the second page as a checklist. If they can answer "Yes" to each question, they are confirming that they have gone through each of the six traits and checked their work.