Paragraph Revision Activity - Peer Review and Self Review Worksheets

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- This bundle contains peer feedback activities for presentations, informational writing, and creative writing. Use these throughout the year and mix-and-match them for different units. This resource also includes activities for self-reflection. (grades 6-10)What other teachers are saying...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ "MyPrice $4.79Original Price $7.75Save $2.96
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Are you ready for students to give meaningful peer feedback and make effective editing choices? This paragraph revision activity helps students tackle high-order and low-order concerns for an introduction and body paragraph. This is the perfect peer review activity or self editing exercise.
✅ Informational and argumentative writing skills
✅ Sample paragraph included
✅ Paper or digital
✅ Low-prep day
✅ Grades 7-10
Your Paragraph Revision Activity includes:
- Introduction Review Worksheet (peer & self)
- Paragraph Review Worksheet (peer & self)
- Fix it: Applicable aspects contain a “fix it” line for reviewers to fill out. This allows reviewers to give more targeted advice. Some examples of uses of this line are available in the example review.
- Model review paragraph
- Model review worksheet
- Digital version (Google Slides and Easel)
This paragraph revision resource contains four worksheets to help students generate feedback about body paragraphs and introductions. It also includes a sample paragraph and review. Students will complete a checklist about ten important aspects of the paragraph and then provide +/Δ feedback.
The ten aspects of the peer and self review are split into high-order and low-order concerns:
High-Order Concerns
⭐️ Topic sentence
⭐️ Relation to thesis
⭐️ Supporting details
⭐️ Summary sentence
⭐️ Citations
Low-Order Concerns
⭐️ Sentence Structure
⭐️ Punctuation
⭐️ Capitalization
⭐️ Spelling
⭐️ Word Choice
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