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This is three samples of the same small moment personal narrative about going down a slide. One sample is far too little writing. The second is more writing, but not focused. The third is an excellent sample. Each sample comes with a visual representation of the metaphor of writing being like digging a hole that we want to be narrow and deep. I find this to be most useful with my students in showing them what we are shooting for.