Sometimes, after working with students to add evidence and details to their essays, they over-correct and have ridiculous amounts of redundancies.
This informational handout provides examples and practice to help eradicate the following from student writing:
= redundant pairs,
= stating the obvious,
= excessive detail,
= phrases for words,
= verbs smothered in nouns,
= common phrases, and
Grammar on the Sentence Level
Four Ways to Use a Comma (PowerPoint)
Revising and Editing Menu Using Ratiocination
Ratiocination -- Color-Coded Essay Revision
Revising: Ratiocination (color coding) for Sentence Variety
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