This flipchart includes a variety of student writing samples in grade 1. They all differ according to ability levels and times of the year that they were written. I use these with my classes to analyze student work. It really helps the children notice what has been done well and what needs improvement. I let the students go up to the Promethean Board and "be the teacher" to edit with different tools" highlighter, red pen, etc. Sometimes I'll have students work in cooperative groups to analyze, discuss, and recommend improvements. Each slide can be used for all 6 traits of writing. Enjoy!